ProjectArbiter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Owl Hunting Day]

Trollololol.

Krutches responds:

lololololololol

[Refugee]

Your problem is the way it was captured (IE your camera).
Also, try to add a soundtrack. Anything that adds a feeling to the story you're trying to tell.
2/5
4.3/10

RedMarlin responds:

Yeah, I was planning on adding a song, but I ran out of time before the project was due. I suppose I could still put one in though.

[Truth of Osama: Remake]

Excellent. I like everything about this, the only thing I can think of that was wrong with it was when they spoke you could hear the background noise, and it's mostly static.
4/5
9/10

Dosensuppen responds:

You're a fantastic individual.

[Truth Of Osama 2]

Kind of cheesy, no offense. I like the music. That's just about it.
The animation is lifeless, and the quality of the vocal recording is horrible.
Add a little more life to your animations, and get better microphones for recording your voice acting, and then your videos should be immensely better.
1/5
2/10

Gimmick responds:

Hmm

I don't exactly try to emphasize vocal recording quality as I am scraping the bottom of the barrel for voice actors who would do it for a cut of the ad rev, and the animation...? I'm not exactly experienced very fully with animation so consider this one of my "practice projects".

[ComboMania 2012]

Doesn't play.
I'd fix that first before trying to re-upload it.

HeThinkzLikeNoOthEr responds:

I wouldn't know how to fix that..the preloaders I use come from this site!!..ive posted a link to another site where it loaded fine!!...the file is fixed now!!

[Dragon Ball Multiverse 1]

You want a real critic? Well, you got one!
To be honest, this was a really good flash. A good majority of the animation and graphics were spot on, but there were those scenes where it looks like you drew them in 10 minutes or less. The voice acting on the time clock was shotty at best, and the fact that none of the characters spoke made the video seem mediocre. And also, some of the animation wasn't very good, either.
But other than that, this was by far one of the best DBZ remakes I have ever seen.
4.5/5 (even though I rated a 5, because I want to see you improve on this :D )
9.7/10

bocodamondo responds:

thanks. il try to get some voices in EP2

[Pokemon - Brock Gets Laid]

LOL! This is EXACTLY how I feel about pokemon. They all just want it up the ass.
Good job, smooth animation, and I honestly didn't see what you were talking about when you said 'Stretched'
5/5
10/10

Speedo responds:

Oh, I just meant like...erm... well the scene where its most notable is when Brock says "SAYWHAAAAAAT?" just before the Dugtrio strikes, the screen sorta' stretches vertically. Its not that big of a deal but little things like that bother me. Thanks alot, though :D

[The Army Executioner-P.1]

Not a bad idea. I like the message that the video delivers, however...
The animation was morbid at best. And the fact that there is no voice acting makes the video worst still.
The message is a good idea, but I suggest adding voice acting, remastering the audio for the video itself, and better animation, other than that, not to bad.
2/5
4/10

MattmanProductionsTM responds:

Ok...mabye i'll redo it, thanks for the review.

[Willie D]

Wow. Text to speech voice acting...
I have to say, this is by far the worst thing I have seen on NG.
-2/5
-5/10
Get better at animating, use REAL voices, and don't just upload stupid shit to NG.

RogersEntertainment responds:

I understand

[A Cursor's Day Alone]

I'm giving it a 3 only because it is pretty decent animation and the music streams good with it. I personally don't like the video, but everything else seems legit on it.
Other than when it starts the loop again there is a pause in the audio. I'd try to fix that before you send it in pal.
3/5
7/10

TheRealNat23 responds:

Yeah, I usually put my loop sounds to event. But this one is different.